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University of Oregon essay:
The UO is interested in learning more about you. Write an essay of 500 words or less that shares information that we cannot find elsewhere on your application. Any topic you choose is welcome. Some ideas you might consider include your future ambitions and goals, a special talent or unusual interest that sets you apart from your peers, or a significant experience that influenced your life. If you are applying to the UO's Robert D. Clark Honors College, feel free to resubmit your honors college application essay.

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Coming of Age: Draft

            Today, people now know me as the girl who’s outgoing and fun to be around. Where as in the past, I would always clutch tightly clutch onto my mother’s hand, trying to hide behind her.  This all changed when I was part of a soccer team. Soccer changed the way I associate with others today. It changed my life forever and showed that I grew more mature.

            I walked onto a soccer field for the first time in my life not knowing how to play or what to do.  Everyday for the first couple weeks of practice, I would always complain to my mom about how I hate the sport. She didn’t bother listening to my comments because for some reason, she absolutely knew that I would come to love this sport, and she was right. For that Saturday when we played our first game, some thing magical happened. The girl who had no idea how to play was starting to dribble past all the approaching defenders and score the first goal for the Pink Butterflies! That wasn’t the end, after I was dribbling up and down the line as if I were training for the Olympics. I could hear the roaring sounds of the parents cheering on the sidelines supporting our team through the whole game. Then suddenly I hear my soccer team running up to talk to me. I made a bunch of new friends and got along with all of them, something I wouldn’t expect. This glorious day will always be with me because it made me realize, soccer is the sport for me.

            By the time I was in fifth grade, my coach decided that it was time for me to join club soccer. At first, I was timid about it and thought of it as too competitive, but my parents and I exchanged some looks and realized, competition is exactly what I need. In that instant, soccer was what I did just about everyday. As my dad parked his truck on my first day practicing, I took one big leap out. Drastically gripping the handles of my bag, I start making my way to the practice field where I saw my coach and team. This first day of practice wasn’t the greatest. It’s a hundred times more intense then any A.Y.S.O. practice I’ve ever been to. We started off with simple warm ups which lead to scrimmaging. Just about everything I did on the field was criticized by the coach, whether I passed it, kicked it, or shot it.  With a few more weeks of training, I started getting a whole lot better. Making new friends was starting to get easier, and easier. Soon enough, I wasn’t known as the quietest girl on the team.

            Finally, high schools just around the corner. To best prepare me for high school season soccer, I joined summer league for Moanalua. Luckily I had my friends join with me. When we played our first game, I thought of as just another simple game, but I was wrong. When I saw how the upper classmen play, I knew I had to step up my game. Those girls were fearless as they passed the ball side to side around everyone like it was a game of pinball and knocked down whoever got in there way. This made me want to practice and train even harder. The day of soccer tryouts came and I put my whole heart into it. They announced that I made the junior varsity team, I was ecstatic! Seeing the girls who were on my team was a little intimidating, but it didn’t bother me. After getting used to my high school team, I wanted to show the coach that I had what it took to be one of the leaders. Shoving the other team as I got the ball, cutting the ball side to side, passing the ball with lightning pace, I knew I was making an impression. Then suddenly, my voice somehow found a way out of my body. I was actually communicating on the field. “Drop back! Man on”, I was starting to become a real soccer player. By doing this, my coaches’ saw that I had true potential. From that day on, I’ve been starting every game for High School and I train everyday with an even greater passion.

            True, when I was younger I was so shy that people didn’t even know my voice. Now, that’s the past. Soccer has leaded me to be the person I am today. Today, I can’t even remember my life without soccer. I may not be a complete social butterfly yet, but at least I’ve gotten better. That’s when I knew, soccer was my coming of age.

BLOG REVISIONS!!!

For my blog, I changed the title to "don't frown, write it down". Then I replaced my old background to a tie dye background. This made my page pop and it went well with my picture because it made the whole theme of this blog fun. I also changed the colors of the headers and links so it goes along with my colorful theme. Lastly, I organized my blog archive by month so it's easier to find.

Mini Essay: Position Statement

There has been a number of incidents dealing with the dangers of some of Hawaii's nature attractions. Although people are saying that it's the States fault for this, the real people to blame are the visitors. They're responsible for their own safety. First of all, people need to take the caution signs seriously. Even with these warnings, people are still taking the whole situation too lightly.Paula Ramirez and Elisabeth Brem died when walking off a cliff near Opaekaa Falls in kaui. The article states that "there was a sign on the left trail advising to keep out." This was to prevent people from going beyond that point, but they didn't listen. Furthermore, the tourists who visit this blowhole can't take this situation lightly, they need to always take precaution. For example, even though visitors heard about cases of others dying and disappearing at the blowhole, there were still a bunch of visitors who decided to gather closely around the blowhole area at Nakalele Point. Knowing about past deaths dealing with this site should be giving people a clearer idea of how they need to be more careful. Lastly, as you visit an unfamiliar place with deathly hazards, it should be common sense to look out for your safety. Unfortuately David Pott's didn't care at all about his own safety. He was seen carelessly dancing around the blowhole which later lead him towards his death as a large wave knocked him in the blowhole. Therefore, it's not our states fault for these deaths dealing with our natural attractions, it's the careless visitors to blame.